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Walk across the bridge
Open up that door
To begin a new life

                Paint the walls
                In shades of mind
                Forget about – all your past strife

Let your heart fill up
Each and every room
Spread your personality around

                Run across the bridge
                Throw open the door
                Be prepared to begin a new way

Because you’re on your own
Living wild and free
No need to submit to the day

                Walk across the bridge
                Open up that door
                To begin your new life
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I got the first three lines of this in my head during class today and I heard them to music. I am not musically oriented at all but I heard them to a song/tune so that is what I put them up to... ^^; Anyway, comments welcome.
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~xXBr0k3n-Wing5Xx:iconxXBr0k3n-Wing5Xx: Mar 31, 2007, 10:45:15 AM
I have some music umphage (yay band...) But it works. It has the beat and stuff needed. Awesome job!

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"Suddenly I see, why the hell it means so much to me." - KT Tunstall 'Suddenly I see'
~Porn-kun:iconPorn-kun: Apr 2, 2007, 5:54:49 PM
I lthink it sounds pretty. It has a nice Rhythm. For some reason or other it makes me think of a Requiem.

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Watch the hands move round the clock
Tie time in knots
Life does the same, in a way.
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Jun 22, 2007, 10:37:06 PM
OOooooh that was amazing. It has such a flow and such IMAGERY that just fades into the next image. it's got a moving feeling, that supports the title and the goal. I relate to it, and it's a beautiful, BEAUTIFUL picture of what transition can mean.

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"Lets get wrecked on pop-tarts and sex
And see the Taj-Mahal"
~TheAvacado:iconTheAvacado: Jun 22, 2007, 10:54:54 PM
^///^ *Blushing* Thank you. I really liked how this turned out, it means alot to me.

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"It is proper for those who tackle the Darkness to go forth blindly."
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Jun 23, 2007, 12:47:37 AM
Good, it's absolutely amazing. Amazing. You're best, if I'm not mistaken.

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"Lets get wrecked on pop-tarts and sex
And see the Taj-Mahal"
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